The whistle blew and Eli started running fast getting straight to second place and it was really hot and he was running really fast and he could feel the air in his lungs but kept going and stayed in second but then became third place as he slowed down a bit to catch his breath. Then a lot of other people passed him as well.
This was a good first effort, Eli, but try to include more detrail and description.
Good job for saying in second for a while. :]